| One possible version With the global climate becoming warmer and warmer, our earth is faced with great threat. As a senior school student, I believe it is everyone’s duty to do something to save our home. Earth Hour is an activity that we can take part in. Let’s switch off our lights and computers, etc. for one hour at a certain time. It’s an easy job for us but a huge amount of energy will be saved if all of us do it together. More people will realize the problem our earth faces and will start to take action. Let’s develop the good habit of saving energy in our daily life and try to make more contributions to our environment. |
| 試題分析：題目要求寫壹份英文倡議書，呼籲大家加入“地球壹小時,人類壹大步”的環保活動。作文要點已經列出，但不要局限於只翻譯每個要點，還要註意作文的上下文銜接。使用第壹人稱來寫，這樣能更有說服力。多使用高級詞匯和重要句型，註意卷面的整潔。 亮點說明範文使用短語is faced with, take part in, switch off, take action, make contributions to等，使作文內容比較充實。範文使用了較多的重要句型：with復合結構With the global climate becoming；固定句型it is everyone’s duty to do...；定語從句an activity that we can和the problem our earth faces。範文最後使用祈使句Let’s...來動員大家參與進來，達到了寫作的目的。 |